Falling For You/Love Me Too?

This is another song I wrote.I'd probably just rate it as average,but all writers usually critic their work more than is neccessary.So I'll just let you be the judge.This one I wrote about a month and a half ago.And I'd like to shout out a very special thanks to the person who inspired this song.I haven't really though much about the title but it'll probably either be 'Love Me Too' or 'Falling For You'.If you have any suggestions on the title or how to improve the song,go ahead and voice out your thoughts.So,here it is...

[Verse 1]
From the way you make me smile,
Everytime I look into your eyes,
To the way I always sigh,
Everytime I hear your voice...

[Pre-chorus 1]
I like you,
I really do,
And I swear..that,
This is true...

[Chorus]
I love you,
Oh,baby,I do,
I can't help it,
You're just too good to be true..
I'm..falling for you,
Wanna call you my boo,
I just want to you to let me know...
If you love me too..-ooh-ooh...

[Verse 2]
I know a place where you and I,
Can live to-gether and for-ever,
Ha-ppi-ly side by side,
I know..it'll be like heaven..
But now it's back to earth for me,
We need to pause the fantasy,
Now that there's no more make believe,
I need to focus on reality..

[Pre-chorus 2]
I need you,
I really do..
Swirling in my heart..
And mind too...

[Chorus]
I love you,
Oh,baby,I do,
I can't help it,
You're just too good to be true..
I'm..falling for you,
Wanna call you my boo,
I just want to you to let me know...
If you love me too..-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh...

[Bridge]
Everytime..I see your face..
I want your lips to touch mine..just one tae-aste....
But I can't..bring..myself to tell you..
How I really feel..about you.......

[The Last Part...a.k.a. The Ending]
I'm FAA-ling for you...
I SWEAR that it's true....
I'm falling for you,
Wanna call you my boo,
I just want you to let me know-ooh....
I love you,
Oh,baby,I do,
I can't help it,
You're just too good to be true..
I'm falling for you,
Wanna call you my boo,
I just want you to let me know-oh..
If you..
Love..
Me..
Too....
If you..love..me too....
.....
If you love me too.


That was it.So,what d'you think?I really enjoyed it.Typing it out here while singing it made me remember how much I like it.But it made me feel kinda depressed.I'm not sure why..Maybe because that was how I felt when I wrote it.I guess I wouldn't give it an average after all...


I think it was really good. : )
Do you?



-Lavinia-
Or as Fera calls me...:)
-Lala-

P.S.-Leave comments,people!All comments will be highly appreciated and deeply loved!XD

I Don't Like How I Look

I don't really like the way I look.Wait-I don't like the way I look.Fullstop.I know it may be a weird thing to say(or not),but...I just don't feel comfortable trying to fit in my skin.It's like a t-shirt that's two sizes smaller than it's supposed to be,and that's saying a lot,because I can practically fit into anything.I feel...as if...my face is not how I want it to look.I know a lot of people feel that way,but with me,it's different.Inside,I'm this tres deep person who comes up with really touching and thoughtful stuff,especially poems filled with pain,empathy,and emotion.But on the outside...I don't know.I just feel that it doesn't potray...ME.It's not ME.I'm not ME.I'm always self-consious.When I go out,that is.At home I obviously don't really give a shit about how I look because I know that my family have known me my whole life and they don't give a shit either.And with my mates,well,it's cool.But when it's strangers and outsiders,haha...I care.I care about the impression I give.No one wants to give a bad impression.Sometimes,I just act like I don't give a shit when I actually do.I'm twisted that way.Correction-in many ways...I feel mixed up.I look like a small,kiddy-like,(some people even go to the extent of calling me "cute") girl,but my personality,thoughts,and perspective...well...they're just really deep.Anyway,I don't like how I look.I look weird.And I am so not comfortable with how I look,as you may have obviously figured out.It's hard to explain.But I think I tried my best to do so in the very best manner possible.:)Sigh.Oh wells.Tomorrow's another day.Okay,now I don't know what I'm saying.Okies.That's it for now.I may continue this post later by editing it...

But for now...

Byes!

-Lavinia-