Falling For You/Love Me Too?

This is another song I wrote.I'd probably just rate it as average,but all writers usually critic their work more than is neccessary.So I'll just let you be the judge.This one I wrote about a month and a half ago.And I'd like to shout out a very special thanks to the person who inspired this song.I haven't really though much about the title but it'll probably either be 'Love Me Too' or 'Falling For You'.If you have any suggestions on the title or how to improve the song,go ahead and voice out your thoughts.So,here it is...

[Verse 1]
From the way you make me smile,
Everytime I look into your eyes,
To the way I always sigh,
Everytime I hear your voice...

[Pre-chorus 1]
I like you,
I really do,
And I swear..that,
This is true...

[Chorus]
I love you,
Oh,baby,I do,
I can't help it,
You're just too good to be true..
I'm..falling for you,
Wanna call you my boo,
I just want to you to let me know...
If you love me too..-ooh-ooh...

[Verse 2]
I know a place where you and I,
Can live to-gether and for-ever,
Ha-ppi-ly side by side,
I know..it'll be like heaven..
But now it's back to earth for me,
We need to pause the fantasy,
Now that there's no more make believe,
I need to focus on reality..

[Pre-chorus 2]
I need you,
I really do..
Swirling in my heart..
And mind too...

[Chorus]
I love you,
Oh,baby,I do,
I can't help it,
You're just too good to be true..
I'm..falling for you,
Wanna call you my boo,
I just want to you to let me know...
If you love me too..-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh...

[Bridge]
Everytime..I see your face..
I want your lips to touch mine..just one tae-aste....
But I can't..bring..myself to tell you..
How I really feel..about you.......

[The Last Part...a.k.a. The Ending]
I'm FAA-ling for you...
I SWEAR that it's true....
I'm falling for you,
Wanna call you my boo,
I just want you to let me know-ooh....
I love you,
Oh,baby,I do,
I can't help it,
You're just too good to be true..
I'm falling for you,
Wanna call you my boo,
I just want you to let me know-oh..
If you..
Love..
Me..
Too....
If you..love..me too....
.....
If you love me too.


That was it.So,what d'you think?I really enjoyed it.Typing it out here while singing it made me remember how much I like it.But it made me feel kinda depressed.I'm not sure why..Maybe because that was how I felt when I wrote it.I guess I wouldn't give it an average after all...


I think it was really good. : )
Do you?



-Lavinia-
Or as Fera calls me...:)
-Lala-

P.S.-Leave comments,people!All comments will be highly appreciated and deeply loved!XD